Hard to tell due to the crap viedeo, but one thing stood out and that was how far your hands are from your body at address, you need to get them a lot closer to your body, and if necessary stand closer to the ball.
Cheers, I will try to remember to take a better camera to the range next time I go. Definately looking back at the video, which is the first time I have seen my own swing, I do stand a bit too far from the ball, and perhaps at the 9 o clock position I club is still a bit shut.